支招小作文(183)I静态柱四个方面患者服务满意度
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May 8 , 2024雅思小作文系列 | 栏目推送说明分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对，最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。[2024/ 4/ 27] The chart below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in different wards of a hospital and replied “very good” about various aspects of their hospital experience.【主体段分段】：蓝色+灰色一段（满意度较高）橙色一段（满意度较低）**文中语言点提示：生活化描述【开头段】The bar chart compares the rate of patient’s positive response in terms of hospital staff, waiting time, treatment quality and quality of after-service for three wards in a hospital.【概述段】It is clear thatHolly Wardperformed the best.Also, among all the four aspects, patients from all the three wardswere most satisfied withquality of treatment.思路要点：- 蓝色(Holly Ward)满意度最高- 三个病房中的患者都对quality of treatment最满意【Body 1】Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatHolly Ward and Maple Wardreceived higher levels of satisfactionin all the four criteria. Remarkably, roughly 90% of the patients from Holly Wardexpressed satisfaction withits staff, quality of treatment and aftercare.Althoughthe queuing time of this wardwas only favored by75% of the surveyed people, it stilloutperformed the other two hospital wardsin this respect.The results in Oak Ward showed a similar pattern. Italsowitnessed the highest evaluation oftreatment quality(80%),closely followed bythe figure for after-service(70%)andthat for hospital staff(68%).However, only half of the patientsgave positive feedback tothe time spent on waiting.思路要点：Holly Ward(蓝色)+ Oak Ward(灰色)：整体满意度较高- 这两个病区的患者，满意度整体较高- 蓝色(Holly Ward)：(1).大约90%的患者对hospital staff, quality of treatment和quality of aftercare满意(2). waiting time满意度→75%，但在这个方面仍然超过其他两个病区- 灰色(Oak Ward)：满意度呈现类似规律(1). quality of treatment满意度最高(80%)，quality of aftercare排第二(70%)，hospital staff排第三(68%)(2). waiting time：满意度仅为50%【Body 2】Nevertheless, Maple Wardwas relatively inferiorin such competition of evaluation. Itreceived positive ratingfrom 57% of the surveyed patients with regard to treatment quality,10% higher than the figure forquality of aftercare. The other two dimensions of evaluationshared a similar satisfaction rate,withapproximately 50%.思路要点：橙色(Maple Ward)满意度都较低- quality of treatment满意度→57%，比quality of aftercare的满意度高10%- hospital staff、waiting time满意度相似，大约50%想了解更多关于课程及留学的信息，请长按识别二维码，添加小助手，或点击“阅读原文”，直接填表咨询。
